Going out during a thunderstrom
And danceing around in the rain
I can't show how my heart is torn,
A scream to let out the pain,
laying here, watching as it grows,
Let my blood run with the color of a crimson rose.
Litsen to the wind howl and feel the lightning's heat,
A burning sensation that I can't get over,
Why did I even think I could accomplish this feat?
Maybe the pain will go away if I'm less sober...
The wind cries,
The lightning dies,
Though the black cloud is still overhead
I fall into the bed
Though I don't know why I even try
I can't even sleep...
All I can do is cry...
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.:EDIT:. i changed a few words, i think there's only one person who can get the symbolism in this
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Man of fire, woman of ice, together as one
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OH SHI-*gets flipped* owwwww o_e
In my world, PPL are pony's that eat butterflys and poop rainbows...
I LOVE KIBA!!!
I have Skittles in my mouth... wanna taste the rainbow??
I woul'd miss you... even if we had never met
oh nice torn apart pic btw
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Man of fire, woman of ice, together as one
thanks
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OH SHI-*gets flipped* owwwww o_e
In my world, PPL are pony's that eat butterflys and poop rainbows...
I LOVE KIBA!!!
I have Skittles in my mouth... wanna taste the rainbow??
I woul'd miss you... even if we had never met
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Man of fire, woman of ice, together as one
--
OH SHI-*gets flipped* owwwww o_e
In my world, PPL are pony's that eat butterflys and poop rainbows...
I LOVE KIBA!!!
I have Skittles in my mouth... wanna taste the rainbow??
I woul'd miss you... even if we had never met
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Man of fire, woman of ice, together as one
--
OH SHI-*gets flipped* owwwww o_e
In my world, PPL are pony's that eat butterflys and poop rainbows...
I LOVE KIBA!!!
I have Skittles in my mouth... wanna taste the rainbow??
I woul'd miss you... even if we had never met
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